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Glori's avatar

No offense, and I agreed with a lot of what you said, but I think you might want to check your work for proper punctuation/grammar/spelling.

I would add that using exclamation marks as often as you did in the article can get rather obnoxious (at least to me, personally), and I would string them out further apart from each other.

When writing fiction, I tend to refrain from using exclamation marks while narrating and rather use them in dialogue.

Prepared Defense's avatar

Yeah, I went through and checked it (after I published for some reason), but some of the stuff that is wrong may very well be on purpose! That's a lot of what this series is about!

Yes! In articles it does can get obnoxious!

And yes, narrative often doesn't need an exclamation!

Glori's avatar

My comment is all periods and yours is all exclamation marks. Maybe we should collaborate so it evens out.

Prepared Defense's avatar

I often used exclamation marks while using comments, it makes it sound like I'm happy to be here.

I'd love to! Hit me with a DM if you wanna collaborate and we can work something out!

Glori's avatar

Understandable! I would love to collaborate, what do you write?

Prepared Defense's avatar

Essays and fantasy mostly.

Glori's avatar

Sounds good, we should probably go for the fantasy because we're never going to agree on how to write an essay.